Chelsea, You did a nice job putting your recordings and images in Movie Maker, adding music and credits and uploading to Youtube then on your blog. You also did a nice job with the research you completed. You were to complete 10 and I see 5 so your list is incomplete.
How to improve: Slow down . . . you talk so fast at time I couldn't understand what you were saying. You sounded like you were in a race. Also the volume was very low. I had it turned up to full volume and was listening on headphones and had to strain to hear.
Chelsea,
ReplyDeleteYou did a nice job putting your recordings and images in Movie Maker, adding music and credits and uploading to Youtube then on your blog. You also did a nice job with the research you completed. You were to complete 10 and I see 5 so your list is incomplete.
How to improve: Slow down . . . you talk so fast at time I couldn't understand what you were saying. You sounded like you were in a race. Also the volume was very low. I had it turned up to full volume and was listening on headphones and had to strain to hear.
Turned in a week late.
70%
I see you did upload it on time so I increased your grade by 10 points.
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